Hair Malfunction-100WC

I was excited to see Stacy. Last week she told she was going to get her hair dyed blonde and i was oozing with anticipation. She was at the back of the oval. I ran over. As soon as she saw me she gave me a wide berth. I finally managed to get her to talk to me. She was crying not crocodile tears the real thing and told me everything. Instead getting her hair blonde it was orange. I collapsed in laughter but I felt sorry for her so within the week I got my hair dyed orange too.

4 thoughts on “Hair Malfunction-100WC

  1. Anna,
    I adore the way you have made use of the words in this piece. They are used to highlight wonderful moments in a delightful and amusing tale.
    …and the words are complimented by the wonderful other vocabulary you have incorporated.
    For tasks like this it can be good to highlight the prompt words in a different colour…and add the 100 word challenge link.
    Well done!
    Ant

  2. Hi Anna,
    good use of the prompt this week! You used really good vocab with it and this story is really nice. Some stuff doesn’t really make sense but it is still a really nice 100 word challenge.
    Good work
    Phoebe 😀

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